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===[[Witold Pilecki]]===
Partial self-nom. A very interesting biography. May need minor English lang improvements, but I believe it is quite good atm. --[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]] 11:10, 29 Dec 2004 (UTC)

* I'd '''support''' this. I learned something new today. —[[User:ExplorerCDT|ExplorerCDT]] 11:37, 29 Dec 2004 (UTC)
*'''Support''' --[[User:Brian0918|brian0918]][[User talk:Brian0918|]] 14:29, 29 Dec 2004 (UTC)
*<s>'''object''': There are to many "red" links, unexistent reference articles. [[User talk: Coburnpharr04]] 11:36 Pm, 29 Dec 2004 (ET)</s>
** Several unimportant ones have been removed. There are ~13 red links left. I don't think this is against any featured rules, besides, red links serve as a reminded of 'to do', showing us what needs to be done. --[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]] 12:21, 30 Dec 2004 (UTC)
*** I '''support''' it now: looks much better with the sectioning. Although I'm strongly against "red articles", I do believe thats this article is quite interesting and should be featured. [[User talk: Coburnpharr04]] 1:44 Pm (ET), 30 Dec 2004
*'''Support''' - the story is interesting, short and well-described. [[User:Halibutt|Halibu]][[User talk:Halibutt|tt]] 02:29, Dec 30, 2004 (UTC)
*'''Support''': This article presents, concisely and evocatively, an important story that is generally unknown to the broader world.
*'''Minor object.''' Desperately needs sectioning. Could do with a minor copyedit, and perhaps to be a bit longer (it's hard to judge length because the pictures are so big). Will consider supporting if just the first one is done, though. [[User:Ambi|Ambi]] 04:45, 30 Dec 2004 (UTC)
** Good point. There is now sectioning. Lenght is ~2350 words, 16k letters or '6 article screens, plus 1 list screen'. --[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]] 12:21, 30 Dec 2004 (UTC)
*I believe this could use some more work to conform to Wikipedia conventions: most obviously, put dates of birth and death in the intro and don't bold the subject's name more than once. I also believe a bit more length wouldn't hurt. However, those are just suggestions, I'm not objecting. [[User:Everyking|Everyking]] 22:09, 30 Dec 2004 (UTC)
*There was ''way'' too much overlinking before I edited this. For example [[Armia Krajowa]], [[Polish]] and [[Polish Government in Exile]] were all linked each time they appeared in the text. The article on the whole also seems too short to me, but since I know nothing of the subject I can't say if the article is comprehensive. In short this is a non-vote (aka just a comment). --[[User:Maveric149|mav]] 06:30, 31 Dec 2004 (UTC)

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